This English lesson, we read a book called "Boy" by Roald Dahl. In the book, there is a old woman who own a sweet shop, she is very mean to the kids and her hands are really dirty. One day, the main character Roald Dahl found a dead mouse under the floor board at his classroom.Our teacher asked us "What would you do with the dead mouse?"
I would wear a mask, use a glove and tongs to pick the dead mouse up and put it in a box, then wrap it with colorful wrappers with a ribbon on the top of the box. Then on the other day after school when I go to the sweet shop, I would say" Mrs. Pratchett, we have a present for you, because the sweets we brought from you are super yummy so we just want to say thank you. "When you receive it, you will scream as loud as you can. " I thought. Hehehe :)
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